Offering Coffee and donuts as the headline of your Presentation will bribe the attention of most investors but in order to win over any potential investors for funding your business you have to impress them with your business. Acumen and not try to dazzle them with exaggerated information. In most instances for every goal you present their response is going to be asking how you are going to achieve that step. This will continue through every step of the process until they are satisfied that your business proposal is sound and that you can meet the goals established.
Most investors are savvy in the ways of business and can quickly see right through hyperbole and hopes. They may agree with you potential on the surface but they are gong to need reassurances that if they put their money into your business plan their investment wont be dashed along with your hopes. They will be looking for contingencies if the road map you present in the form of a business plan runs into a dead end street.
Establishing bullet points and datelines for each goal to be met will be a good starting point on your business plan, but will nothing to impress investors. They not only want to see...